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D-girl extraordinaire Carter Swan and journeyman scribe Philip Eisner deconstruct the first 15 pages of your screenplay and tell you why it sucks. Also: racial epithets, meandering rants, non-sequiturs, the inside scoop on how movies really get made, and occasional nudity.


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The First 15 Ep. 7 – Adam’s Trek

The First 15 Ep. 7 – Adam’s Trek

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Are you interested in submitting your script the First 15? This is not a cattle call seminar or overpriced workshop run by failed execs. If ...

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The First 15 Ep. 6 – Thieves in the Night

The First 15 Ep. 6 – Thieves in the Night

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Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...

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The First 15 Ep. 5 – Event Horizon

The First 15 Ep. 5 – Event Horizon

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Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...

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The First 15 Ep. 4 – The Farm

The First 15 Ep. 4 – The Farm

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Every other week, Carter Swan and Philip Eisner read the first 15 pages from TriggerStreet.com members. This week is THE FARM by Mike Hughes. The ...

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The First 15 Ep. 3 – Eulogy

The First 15 Ep. 3 – Eulogy

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Every other week, Phil and Carter review a script from TriggerStreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest ...

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The First 15 Ep. 2 – Merely Freshmen

The First 15 Ep. 2 – Merely Freshmen

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Each episode Philip Eisner and Carter Swan review a screenplay from TriggerStreet.com. This week review’s Mike Souder’s script MERELY ...

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The First 15 Ep. 1 – The Great War

The First 15 Ep. 1 – The Great War

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Phil Eisner and Carter Swan talk with Trigger Street Labs user Jeff Marks about his screenplay “The Great War” This week’s guest is Jeff Marks ...

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