The First 15 »

D-girl extraordinaire Carter Swan and journeyman scribe Philip Eisner deconstruct the first 15 pages of your screenplay and tell you why it sucks. Also: racial epithets, meandering rants, non-sequiturs, the inside scoop on how movies really get made, and occasional nudity.
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The First 15 Ep. 7 – Adam’s Trek
Are you interested in submitting your script the First 15? This is not a cattle call seminar or overpriced workshop run by failed execs. If ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 6 – Thieves in the Night
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 5 – Event Horizon
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 4 – The Farm
Every other week, Carter Swan and Philip Eisner read the first 15 pages from TriggerStreet.com members. This week is THE FARM by Mike Hughes. The ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 3 – Eulogy
Every other week, Phil and Carter review a script from TriggerStreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 2 – Merely Freshmen
Each episode Philip Eisner and Carter Swan review a screenplay from TriggerStreet.com. This week review’s Mike Souder’s script MERELY ...
Read More »The First 15 Ep. 1 – The Great War
Phil Eisner and Carter Swan talk with Trigger Street Labs user Jeff Marks about his screenplay “The Great War” This week’s guest is Jeff Marks ...
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