The First 15 »
D-girl extraordinaire Carter Swan and journeyman scribe Philip Eisner deconstruct the first 15 pages of your screenplay and tell you why it sucks. Also: racial epithets, meandering rants, non-sequiturs, the inside scoop on how movies really get made, and occasional nudity.
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When the U.K turns into a battleground for nationwide rioting and social collapse, a lowly office worker must get back home and rescue his disabled ...Read More »
END OF TIME is an action-fueled high fantasy set in a world where magic exists and soldiers fight with swords and arrows instead of guns. ...Read More »
A secret agent’s memory is erased as she is decommissioned after a failed mission, but when her evil nemesis (and sister) returns after many years, ...Read More »
Broken by Will Hare Logline: A young man’s fragile life is shattered when an ultimatum forces him to care for the brother that abused him ...Read More »
A Debt to Society Screenplay by Brian Murphy and Doug Johnson Logline: In a prisonless privatized future, a lethal bounty hunter sets out to collect ...Read More »
Doppelgangers Story by Spencer Eldridge & Joanne Hudson Screenplay by Joanne Hudson WATCH or LISTEN to this episode on iTunes. Logline: Jeff Bridges has gotten ...Read More »
BOSS OF ME by Russell Corey Logline: Desperate out of work guys create a phony company, just so they can say on their resumes that ...Read More »
Pitch advice and writing for alternate universes. Carter and Phil have Cory Newman on the show to discuss his Trigger Street Labs screenplay “Farmwood” – ...Read More »
In 2015 the world hits a state of famine. 15 years later society is divided into health obsessed, law abiding, rationed state against a rebellious ...Read More »
When his mother dies, a talented college wrestler moves in with his estranged father and pursues a mixed martial arts career against his wishes. Today’s ...Read More »
Each episode of The First 15 brings screenwriting members of Trigger Street Labs to a live workshop of their screenplay’s first 15 pages. Today’s screenplay ...Read More »
Today’s Script is FAMOUS FRANK by Richard Fordyce. Synopsis: After a career teaching Latin and Greek to schoolchildren, Frank is widowed and sliding happily into ...Read More »