The First 15 »
D-girl extraordinaire Carter Swan and journeyman scribe Philip Eisner deconstruct the first 15 pages of your screenplay and tell you why it sucks. Also: racial epithets, meandering rants, non-sequiturs, the inside scoop on how movies really get made, and occasional nudity.
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The First 15 Ep. 14 – Submission
When his mother dies, a talented college wrestler moves in with his estranged father and pursues a mixed martial arts career against his wishes. Today’s ...
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The First 15 Ep. 13 – Mind of the Beholder
Each episode of The First 15 brings screenwriting members of Trigger Street Labs to a live workshop of their screenplay’s first 15 pages. Today’s screenplay ...
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The First 15 Ep. 12 – Famous Frank
Today’s Script is FAMOUS FRANK by Richard Fordyce. Synopsis: After a career teaching Latin and Greek to schoolchildren, Frank is widowed and sliding happily into ...
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The First 15 Ep. 11 – A Circle in the Water
“A Circle in the Water” by Michael Daniel Synopsis: A Stone Mountain family fights societal hatred for a generation to save its family farm and ...
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The First 15 Ep. 10 – RATED R
Today’s Script: “Rated R” By Mike Leon Synopsis: A bored video store clerk learns that her co-worker is really a disgruntled action hero hiding from ...
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The First 15 Ep. 9 – Dungeon Master Olympics
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Trigger Street labs and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them ...
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The First 15 Ep. 8 – Monster Mash
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...
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The First 15 Ep. 7 – Adam’s Trek
Are you interested in submitting your script the First 15? This is not a cattle call seminar or overpriced workshop run by failed execs. If ...
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The First 15 Ep. 6 – Thieves in the Night
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...
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The First 15 Ep. 5 – Event Horizon
Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Labs.Triggerstreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and ...
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The First 15 Ep. 4 – The Farm
Every other week, Carter Swan and Philip Eisner read the first 15 pages from TriggerStreet.com members. This week is THE FARM by Mike Hughes. The ...
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The First 15 Ep. 3 – Eulogy
Every other week, Phil and Carter review a script from TriggerStreet.com and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest ...
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